October Girl

(Marc Luna) "Of course I still love you. I've killed people too." I said. She looked up, "Yes, well you did that for you're country. It's different." She said. "No ...

(Marc Luna) I heard myself growl deep in my throat, I've never heard a human produce such a sound. I clenched my fists at my sides, he RAPED her? I ...

Jessica "I don't need you I'll do it myself." "Oh, go ahead." He challenged. I blinked and disapeared, I blinked and I came back. "Whoa.... Head rush.... You never told ...

Jessica "Well I remember a certain someone, I won't say who, almost eating me!" I yelled. "I don't eat junk food." He joked "Oh bite me." I said. "Already did." ...

Jessica "Face it you need me." He laughed, "I don't need you I'll do it myself." "Ha, Jess c'mon you wouldn't last one day." He said, but then slapped a ...

Hmm, so different. I like it, but I think you need to add on a bit more.... I think you kind of forced the ryme, not a good thing..... just ...

Rogue (Robyn) "It's my fault... I should have been here with him." Jewel sobbed. That made me angry and it hurt me too, I grabbed Jewel's face with my hands ...

(Jessica) "Ah, just hopefully I don't turn into you, 'i'm a badass vampire and I can't die'." He glared and clutched his heart "Ouch, ice woman." He joked.

Ropgue (Robyn) "Why the hell didn't he just fight back....." I sobbed, now I was the one who should have watched my laungage, I'd never cussed before and it hurt. ...

Rogue (Robyn) "Don't you dare touch him!" I whispered toward Rusty. "Shut up Robyn, if you know what's good for you." With that he slapped me, a hard vibating slap ...

(Jessica) I stood up and pushed him, but only because he let me, he fell on his ass on the barn floor. "Ok, fine maybe I deserved that." When he ...

Are you kidding me? That's it?! That's all you wrote.... c'mon get on the ball woman I want to read more!!! What's going to happen? Who are they? How'd they ...

Rogue (Robyn) I caught Jewel as she fell, Cowboy was dead.... who would want to kill him, raw anger pumped through my veins no one not even my real parents ...

(Marc Luna) "So where's their mom, why isn't she taking care of them, I think it's unfair that she just dumps them on you and then takes off to her ...

(Marc Luna) "Syb you can't... Military bases only allow family relitives I mean my sister and my daughters but...." ah shit when was I going to learn to shut my ...